Thursday, 24 April 2014

The character tree- 24/4/14

“The Character tree”- Film Crit Hulk
Screenwriting 101

The hunters
Sarah and Katie.
Katie-Chewy

FEET
What does this person Look like?
Short 5’4” Blonde hair curly, She likes to straighten it.
Wears denim shorts and a leather jacket.
Has one side of her hair pinned back and very simplistic make-up slightly winged at the side. She also has a lip piercing on one side of her face.
Where do they live?
With the other hunter Sarah, In a tent as they travel around a lot. She has no solid home.
Where did they go to school?
Her father and mother home schooled her before they died when she was 16 ever since she has educated herself.
Do they have tattoos and why?
No, because she hasn’t had the time she would like to in the future. To depict her life and adventures.
Who is their best friend?
Sarah she has lived with her since she was 17 when they first discovered their families crossed paths looking for the same book.
What is their occupation?
She is a hunter, She hunts down magical artefacts with her best friend Sarah it has been a job their families have done for generations. The only people who know are the ones who need to.

Groin and Guts
What does this person WANT?
She wants to kill her ex boyfriend who is possessed because he killed her brother, Eye for eye, tooth for tooth.

How does their sexuality manifest itself?
She has loved many partners but they never really last, she yearns for the attention that a parent would give her from a lover. She is confident to get what she wants and will happily assert her place.
What do they feel about the classic sins?
If its fun it’s not a sin, you have to do what you do to live through life. Otherwise you are not living life at all. She is a very envious and proud person. To her none of this is a sin, it’s who she is and you will have to deal with it.
What about them is really basic and puerile?
She likes to get what she want’s if not she can turn quite nasty. She is sarcastic and sometimes quite rude. But enjoys living life in the moment even if that means building a fort made out of twigs just because she can she will. (Her childhood was taken so she lives it everyday she can)

Heart
What does this person NEED?
She need’s to learn to deal with the idea of loosing someone. She would be a much better person for it. She would be in a much nicer life balance. She also needs to find someone or something that wont leave.
What will make them a more functional person?
A stable home, and family. She needs a balance. And to learn to communicate her feelings more openly without the use of violence or death.
Do they need to find self-confidence? Humility?
She is already a very self-confident person; she also doesn’t need to find humility as her job is unrewarding as no one knows about it.
Do they need to provide for their family?
She has no family other than her friend Sarah they both provide together as one is not dominant over the other they are a team, Sarah is the only family Katie has knows for a long time.

Throat
How does the person sound?
She has a high-pitched voice and slightly strained through crying. At night when no one is around.
How do they project themselves?
She projects herself through yelling and screaming. But she sometimes projects her voice to the floor so you loose words.
How do they try to come off?
She try’s to come off as a strong a powerful individual who does not need the aid of others.
How do they actually come off to people?
She comes across as powerful and individual with a hint of mystery. They see her as slightly rude and very sarcastic. She shows that she is in charge as soon as she is present.

Left Cheek
What is their intelligence?
She is not very intelligent due to lack of schooling. Her intelligence comes through when in situations not expected by others. And in situations most people of the modern day would not be able to cope with.
How does this manifest itself?
She is good in emergency situations and those which need outdoor experience she can fight very well and kill quietly.
How practical are they?
For her line of work very important, and practical but in the real world her knowledge would be useless.
How do they solve problems?
She solves problems by being hot headed her first idea is her best and she follows her gut instinct and her senses.  Her senses are better then most due to being away from modern technologies most of her life.



Right cheek
What is their creative capacity?
She is very creative with the way she survives and uses her logic. When it comes to painting and drawing she would not be interested.
What elements are not practical?
The fact that she has no other thoughts but revenge are not practical she gets distracted by the thoughts of fighting and her inner anger she does not release or talk about.
What is their spirituality?
She is very one with nature but does not believe in a god. She is thankful for the sun because that is the only reason she gets up in the morning; if the sun were gone the world would die.  She looks after her environment as she does not use cars or anything modernised.

The Crown
Review your answers. Do they represent a consistent character psychology?
I think this character does have a consistent phycology.

What are their defining memories?
Her parents dying, watching the death of her brother committed by a lover. Her adventure’s of hunting artefact’s and magic items and beings.
How, in a nutshell do they behave?
 She is a strong and individual character with a lot of pain behind her eyes. She has lost nearly everyone who has been close to her except for her friend Sarah.  She tries to come across as happy but will often come across as rude and sarcastic as her way of coping. She yearns for love and affection but she has persuaded herself it will never be.

She tries to think logically but life has thrown so much                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     her way she is a hot headed mess.


Friday, 4 April 2014

Changes from one film to another.

My original idea was called the untold fairytale. Due to the lose of two actors at last minuet and not being bale to find the cast to fill their shoes. So i decided to look back at my drawing board at my previous ideas.

I had originally come up with the idea of making a sequel to the film i was making i had the research complete from the first programme all i need was to write a new script re-organise the sound track the costumes and a few of the props. I decided to use the same location and film dates i had already chosen. 

And the new film was born. 

This is a sequel of the first story: 
http://docdroid.net/asne

Story line: 
The events of Ebony's life has been well over for a few 100 years, The magic mirror has been destroyed and the evil magic has once again been transferred to the book, If you read this book without an open mind it will consume your soul and use your body as a host. It has done this for the past 100 years. But as the years have gone the book has become more and more evil. All those bad guys we hate…Hitler and so on…Thanks to the book. 

The only way to stop the book is for Ebony's descendant to read the book, and let her mind over power the book. The power become to much for the book and it is eventually destroyed.
But can she do it in time before her friends are killed? 

The book script: 
http://docdroid.net/asnk

The changes i have made from one script to this is the characters. I decided this was the best choice because the timing from now until filming is not long enough to prep a new actor. My cast and film crew where all aware of the possibility of changing they where all confident in the new roles they where given. I had also cut down the timing from the first film of roughly 30mins to roughly 15-16 mins i did this for two reason's filming time would go down equalling in budget decreasing. And for the chance to incorporate the film into some film festivals in the future. 

I also decided to no longer use the amount of after effects i had originally designed for the first film this cuts down on the edit time meaning i can create interesting tension and effects spending longer on the shots themselves and the sound track. The changes to my first sound track idea's won't be too different because the film still aimed to be in the fantasy region meaning the sound type won't change to much, The only thing that will significantly change is the timing and the intro song which i have discussed with the people helping me create the original track. 

The costume changes are quite dramatic from each character having multiple costumes because the first film was set over a few days the second film is based over 2 days with no costume changes because of the sleeping style. Resulting in each character needing only 1 costume. This cuts down on time wasted in costume change and make-up changes. The only time it does increase is hair preparation as we need it too seem as if it is over two days.

I think this will still work as well as my original idea because i have the passion of the first film moved onto this. I have completely prepped and i am ready to film on the dates. 

Thursday, 3 April 2014

Beat Sheet- Pitch Perfect 3/4/14

Opening- Aubrey vomits at the acapella competition

Theme- Introduction to Becca and her joining the college scene .

Set-up: Her joining the college introduction to Jesse’ and her room mate.

Catalyst: Titanium scene in bathroom with Chloe…

Debate: Dad offers her an ultimatum of joining a club for a year if she still doesn’t like college helping her move to new york.

Break into two: Joining the Barden bellas

B-Story: Jesse and Becca become close

Fun and games: The first competition and the second completion

Midpoint: Becca goes to jail has a huge argument with Jesse and leaves Barden bellas

Bad guys close in: Fight between the Barden bellas over pitch pipe

All is lost:  Goes to her dad’s house and finally realises she needs the girls

Dark night of the soul: Spends the half term by herself

Break into three: Goes to the Barden bellas and asks to be taken back

Finale: Training for the final completion using becca’s methods


Final image: The final song…winning the competition and the beginning of the new semester auditions.

The beat sheet was made by Blake Snyder. He said that most films follow this patters we discussed this and went on to figure it out for our own film we had chased at the beginning of the lesson.


Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Final Major Project- Pitch

We gave our pitches to paul and in front of the group here is the presentation i used.